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		By: David Russell		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[David Russell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2020 14:22:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-334587&quot;&gt;Cate Hogan&lt;/a&gt;.

I noticed on your blog, all the replies, have the current date. I suggest fixing this, it is misleading, I don&#039;t like conversations that happen over YEARS.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-334587">Cate Hogan</a>.</p>
<p>I noticed on your blog, all the replies, have the current date. I suggest fixing this, it is misleading, I don&#8217;t like conversations that happen over YEARS.</p>
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		By: Cate Hogan		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Cate Hogan]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Feb 2016 01:09:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thank you for this great article! Setting up the story with intrigue and empathy is so important, something a lot of writers forget when they get swept up in the excitement of putting pen to paper. Here is an article I wrote called \&quot;Introducing a Character, Not a Bore\&quot; that I thought you might enjoy: https://catehogan.com/introducing_your_character/]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for this great article! Setting up the story with intrigue and empathy is so important, something a lot of writers forget when they get swept up in the excitement of putting pen to paper. Here is an article I wrote called \&#8221;Introducing a Character, Not a Bore\&#8221; that I thought you might enjoy: <a href="https://catehogan.com/introducing_your_character/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://catehogan.com/introducing_your_character/</a></p>
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		By: CelticBearWoman		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[CelticBearWoman]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jun 2013 01:54:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I noticed while reading Armageddon that the (Bruce Willis) character wasn&#039;t intro&#039;d until very late, or even mentioned. Once he was intro&#039;d, they knocked it out of the park, and he never left the screen after that.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I noticed while reading Armageddon that the (Bruce Willis) character wasn&#8217;t intro&#8217;d until very late, or even mentioned. Once he was intro&#8217;d, they knocked it out of the park, and he never left the screen after that.</p>
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		By: Warren Shuman		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Warren Shuman]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 12 Nov 2010 20:08:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I am a new ISA member, but with years in writing and producing TV commercials (mini-movies), now a novice screenwriter. I understand the Rules and Techniques in discussion, but I believe in writing for the audience. I try to grab their attention by developing the traits and arc of the Protagonist, his/her problems, and goals. A powerful Antagonist, etc., and follow-up to the inciting incidents quickly, within the first 5-10 pages. Hopefully, the audience will empathize with sufficient curiosity to become involved in the story
and stay in their seat.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am a new ISA member, but with years in writing and producing TV commercials (mini-movies), now a novice screenwriter. I understand the Rules and Techniques in discussion, but I believe in writing for the audience. I try to grab their attention by developing the traits and arc of the Protagonist, his/her problems, and goals. A powerful Antagonist, etc., and follow-up to the inciting incidents quickly, within the first 5-10 pages. Hopefully, the audience will empathize with sufficient curiosity to become involved in the story<br />
and stay in their seat.</p>
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		By: Jack Brislee		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jack Brislee]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Oct 2010 06:14:39 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-793&quot;&gt;Clive Hopkins&lt;/a&gt;.

The iron glad rule is &quot;It must be entertaining&quot;.  Then there are guidelines, suggestions, techniques and examples.  Films that ignore all guidlines, sugestions, techniques and examples usually play in very small theatres to very small audiences who often wish the writer had reached for his revolver.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-793">Clive Hopkins</a>.</p>
<p>The iron glad rule is &#8220;It must be entertaining&#8221;.  Then there are guidelines, suggestions, techniques and examples.  Films that ignore all guidlines, sugestions, techniques and examples usually play in very small theatres to very small audiences who often wish the writer had reached for his revolver.</p>
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		By: Jack Brislee		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jack Brislee]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Oct 2010 06:10:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-791&quot;&gt;Mark&lt;/a&gt;.

I suppose the other thing with TV series is a late introduction of the protagonist will not detract from the story.  We already know the protagonist from previous episodes.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-791">Mark</a>.</p>
<p>I suppose the other thing with TV series is a late introduction of the protagonist will not detract from the story.  We already know the protagonist from previous episodes.</p>
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		By: Jack Brislee		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jack Brislee]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Oct 2010 06:08:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-790&quot;&gt;Sarah&lt;/a&gt;.

That is a good example, Sarah.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-790">Sarah</a>.</p>
<p>That is a good example, Sarah.</p>
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		By: Jack Brislee		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jack Brislee]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Oct 2010 06:05:23 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-797&quot;&gt;Linda Cowgill&lt;/a&gt;.

I agree that Marge is Jerry’s antagonist, but I also think she is the film’s protagonist.  Perhaps we have discovered a new type of character – the Protantag or the Antagpro.

I am very flattered to receive a response from you, Linda, and think that your book, “The Art of Plotting – Add Emotion, Suspense and Depth to your Screenplay” (reviewed by me on this website earlier in the year) is one of the best.  Many screenwriting experts fail to explore the audience’s emotional reaction to a film, and your book rectifies this problem.  I think all screenwriters should add a column to their step outlines or index cards headed: “How do I want the audience to react emotionally here?”  They should then check that each scene is likely produce the desired reaction.    

I can think of many films where my emotional reaction has unfortunately been indifference.  I can also think of many others where the writer had me exactly where he or she wanted me.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-797">Linda Cowgill</a>.</p>
<p>I agree that Marge is Jerry’s antagonist, but I also think she is the film’s protagonist.  Perhaps we have discovered a new type of character – the Protantag or the Antagpro.</p>
<p>I am very flattered to receive a response from you, Linda, and think that your book, “The Art of Plotting – Add Emotion, Suspense and Depth to your Screenplay” (reviewed by me on this website earlier in the year) is one of the best.  Many screenwriting experts fail to explore the audience’s emotional reaction to a film, and your book rectifies this problem.  I think all screenwriters should add a column to their step outlines or index cards headed: “How do I want the audience to react emotionally here?”  They should then check that each scene is likely produce the desired reaction.    </p>
<p>I can think of many films where my emotional reaction has unfortunately been indifference.  I can also think of many others where the writer had me exactly where he or she wanted me.</p>
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		By: Karel Segers		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Oct 2010 05:09:32 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-796&quot;&gt;Patrick&lt;/a&gt;.

Psycho probably goes against a few more common principles. I have a hunch Jack is keeping that one up his sleeve for later.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-796">Patrick</a>.</p>
<p>Psycho probably goes against a few more common principles. I have a hunch Jack is keeping that one up his sleeve for later.</p>
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		By: Linda Cowgill		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/introduce-the-protagonist-on-page-one/#comment-797</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Linda Cowgill]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2010 04:22:58 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I noticed that you quote me above saying, &quot;The beginning of a film must set up a dramatic problem for the protagonist…&quot;  It&#039;s the problem that is set up, and it usually will involve the protagonist.  But not always right away.  I agree that there are no rules in screenwriting, only a couple of fundamental principles.  The many good examples sited above attest to this.  I might argue, though, that Marge is Jerry&#039;s antagonist. 
-Linda Cowgill]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I noticed that you quote me above saying, &#8220;The beginning of a film must set up a dramatic problem for the protagonist…&#8221;  It&#8217;s the problem that is set up, and it usually will involve the protagonist.  But not always right away.  I agree that there are no rules in screenwriting, only a couple of fundamental principles.  The many good examples sited above attest to this.  I might argue, though, that Marge is Jerry&#8217;s antagonist.<br />
-Linda Cowgill</p>
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