Comments on: Screenwriting Book Review: Constructing a Story https://www.thestorydepartment.com/lavandier-constructing-story/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Thu, 03 May 2018 19:47:55 +0000 hourly 1 By: Yves Lavandier https://www.thestorydepartment.com/lavandier-constructing-story/#comment-345342 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 07:52:59 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=234645#comment-345342 Hi Jack. Thanks a lot for your review. I probably didn’t make myself clear on dialogue. I don’t defend at all realistic dialogue with “Um’s”, “ah’s” and “let me rephrase that” ! Also, tell your readers the book is cheaper on http://www.clown-enfant.com/leclown/shop/ . Best, Yves Lavandier

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