https://www.thestorydepartment.com/logline-it-black-list-2012-week-32/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Sun, 13 Dec 2015 05:55:43 +0000 hourly 1 https://www.thestorydepartment.com/logline-it-black-list-2012-week-32/#comment-334383 Sun, 13 Dec 2015 05:55:43 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=30199#comment-334383 My questions are: How does diosrtyeng the time machines help her discover the power to travel through time? Is she a clone or machine herself that can be easily reproduced? And why is it important for her to figure out who she is?I don’t know if you can distill or add something that answers those questions, but that’s where I’m looking.And I hate loglines too. I’m so familiar with my own story that I can’t ever condense it.

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