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	Comments on: Logline it! &#8211; Black List 2012 &#8211; Week 5	</title>
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		By: Nicolas		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Nicolas]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Dec 2015 04:57:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Here&#039;s my two cents:When sixteen-year-old Kali Anderson dsicovers the power to travel through time within her, the (adj - US, New World, post apocolyptic, give us an idea of the setting here to describe evil gov) governement wants to reproduce her so they can (do what? Take over other time periods? Come into power in the past or future?). Now she must (do something - goal - finding out who she is is a little vague) or else (big bad that will happen if she fails). You could also work your last sentence as &quot;In order to XXX she must XXX.&quot;I hope this helps. I&#039;m still working on mine so please take it with a grain of salt. Good luck!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s my two cents:When sixteen-year-old Kali Anderson dsicovers the power to travel through time within her, the (adj &#8211; US, New World, post apocolyptic, give us an idea of the setting here to describe evil gov) governement wants to reproduce her so they can (do what? Take over other time periods? Come into power in the past or future?). Now she must (do something &#8211; goal &#8211; finding out who she is is a little vague) or else (big bad that will happen if she fails). You could also work your last sentence as &#8220;In order to XXX she must XXX.&#8221;I hope this helps. I&#8217;m still working on mine so please take it with a grain of salt. Good luck!</p>
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		By: wks		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Mar 2013 03:10:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[The Cherries&quot; logline has all the elements of a high concept twist on Teen-sex movies. The sense of urgency is present in the &quot;Prom Night&quot; reference - for a logline.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Cherries&#8221; logline has all the elements of a high concept twist on Teen-sex movies. The sense of urgency is present in the &#8220;Prom Night&#8221; reference &#8211; for a logline.</p>
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