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		By: Art Advice Which Happens To Apply To Writing As Well &#124; Lynley Stace		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Art Advice Which Happens To Apply To Writing As Well &#124; Lynley Stace]]></dc:creator>
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		By: joe velikovsky		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Nice work Cherie. Enjoyed this post.

Reminds me also of Betty Edwards&#039; &quot;Drawing On the Right Side Of The Brain&quot;

ie Most people - when learning to draw, without realizing it - they `abstract&#039; what they see, into an idea, then: try and draw that idea/abstraction...

(ie An Artist, to Self: Ok, I am now going to draw, &quot;the nose&quot;... and they see a nose but then imagine a nose symbol and they draw that, rather than: draw the `actual lines of light &#038; shade&#039; that are in front of their very eyes, ie the person&#039;s nose...)

So Betty suggests, turning `the image&#039; (eg a photo - of a person, or a chair) upside down and just draw `the lines&#039;... then turn it back the right way when done - and suddenly its an amazingly truthful observation of: the actual `lines and angles&#039; they are trying to capture (obviously you don&#039;t do this forever - but it trains the mind to stop interpreting what they see into ideas/symbols - and just simply see the light and shade and the lines before them, and draw THAT... not &quot;the idea of what they see&quot;...)

Anyway, you know all this, as it&#039;s exactly what you&#039;ve illustrated above - very well :)

Also reminds me of `The Mike Leigh Method&#039;: he generally gets his actors to pick a person they know very well, and combine it with another person that they know very well... then gets them to improvise around a basic storyline - as if they were that character... they workshop the story with all the actors involved doing this - then rehearse it/rework it loads - and end up with remarkable character pieces on film.

But yeah, a screenwriter (or playwright) kind of has to do all that, in their head!
You&#039;ve really explained something so well that is rarely talked about.
(ie That&#039;s what wrong with a lot of scripts, they have the imagined `idea of dramatic moments&#039;, but not &quot;real&quot; dramatic moments...)

Anyway, love this article... all rings very true :)

Cheers,


JT Velikovsky
High ROI Film/Story/Screenplay Consultant
https://storyality.wordpress.com/]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice work Cherie. Enjoyed this post.</p>
<p>Reminds me also of Betty Edwards&#8217; &#8220;Drawing On the Right Side Of The Brain&#8221;</p>
<p>ie Most people &#8211; when learning to draw, without realizing it &#8211; they `abstract&#8217; what they see, into an idea, then: try and draw that idea/abstraction&#8230;</p>
<p>(ie An Artist, to Self: Ok, I am now going to draw, &#8220;the nose&#8221;&#8230; and they see a nose but then imagine a nose symbol and they draw that, rather than: draw the `actual lines of light &amp; shade&#8217; that are in front of their very eyes, ie the person&#8217;s nose&#8230;)</p>
<p>So Betty suggests, turning `the image&#8217; (eg a photo &#8211; of a person, or a chair) upside down and just draw `the lines&#8217;&#8230; then turn it back the right way when done &#8211; and suddenly its an amazingly truthful observation of: the actual `lines and angles&#8217; they are trying to capture (obviously you don&#8217;t do this forever &#8211; but it trains the mind to stop interpreting what they see into ideas/symbols &#8211; and just simply see the light and shade and the lines before them, and draw THAT&#8230; not &#8220;the idea of what they see&#8221;&#8230;)</p>
<p>Anyway, you know all this, as it&#8217;s exactly what you&#8217;ve illustrated above &#8211; very well :)</p>
<p>Also reminds me of `The Mike Leigh Method&#8217;: he generally gets his actors to pick a person they know very well, and combine it with another person that they know very well&#8230; then gets them to improvise around a basic storyline &#8211; as if they were that character&#8230; they workshop the story with all the actors involved doing this &#8211; then rehearse it/rework it loads &#8211; and end up with remarkable character pieces on film.</p>
<p>But yeah, a screenwriter (or playwright) kind of has to do all that, in their head!<br />
You&#8217;ve really explained something so well that is rarely talked about.<br />
(ie That&#8217;s what wrong with a lot of scripts, they have the imagined `idea of dramatic moments&#8217;, but not &#8220;real&#8221; dramatic moments&#8230;)</p>
<p>Anyway, love this article&#8230; all rings very true :)</p>
<p>Cheers,</p>
<p>JT Velikovsky<br />
High ROI Film/Story/Screenplay Consultant<br />
<a href="https://storyality.wordpress.com/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://storyality.wordpress.com/</a></p>
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		By: Amber Kuhn		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Oct 2011 13:18:56 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Beautiful piece of writing Cherie! Your honesty shines through in such an informative way. I&#039;m not sure if you&#039;ve read Anne Lamott&#039;s book, Bird by bird? Fantastic read that touches on some of these key points. Well done my dear.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Beautiful piece of writing Cherie! Your honesty shines through in such an informative way. I&#8217;m not sure if you&#8217;ve read Anne Lamott&#8217;s book, Bird by bird? Fantastic read that touches on some of these key points. Well done my dear.</p>
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