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		By: Mark		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mark]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Aug 2012 16:49:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1278&quot;&gt;Kartia&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you Kartia, I am hoping you are right. Time will tell. But thank you for your kind words. :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1278">Kartia</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you Kartia, I am hoping you are right. Time will tell. But thank you for your kind words. :-)</p>
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		By: Kartia		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Aug 2012 11:09:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hey Mark.......Congratulations on all that you have achieved I hope that your next small note to all of us through Karel&#039;s group will tell us you have struck the big time. And one of those scripts will come to fruition. All the best.......Kartia ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Mark&#8230;&#8230;.Congratulations on all that you have achieved I hope that your next small note to all of us through Karel&#8217;s group will tell us you have struck the big time. And one of those scripts will come to fruition. All the best&#8230;&#8230;.Kartia </p>
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		By: sonia		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Aug 2012 05:51:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1276&quot;&gt;Clive Hopkins&lt;/a&gt;.

Clive, sometimes you just gotta strike when the iron&#039;s hot.  Of course one wants to deliver the best script possible, but sometimes an idea fits a gap that people have funding for. It does happen.  I just had a film financed from a synopsis. So don&#039;t worry about it.  You don&#039;t have to do it that way, but I just did.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1276">Clive Hopkins</a>.</p>
<p>Clive, sometimes you just gotta strike when the iron&#8217;s hot.  Of course one wants to deliver the best script possible, but sometimes an idea fits a gap that people have funding for. It does happen.  I just had a film financed from a synopsis. So don&#8217;t worry about it.  You don&#8217;t have to do it that way, but I just did.</p>
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		By: Clive Hopkins		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Clive Hopkins]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Aug 2012 21:21:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1273&quot;&gt;Mark&lt;/a&gt;.

I&#039;m glad this idea wasn&#039;t something you came up with in the shower on the day of the pitch, but my point still remains:


Formulating idea in head for 3+ years – good!


Spent the last year working intensely on logline &#038; synopsis – good!



wrote script in 1-2 weeks (was it one or two?) and delivered it to the industry – are you insane?!?


Am I the only one who thinks this? Are there any other professional writers reading this, or am I the only one? Help me out here guys!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1273">Mark</a>.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m glad this idea wasn&#8217;t something you came up with in the shower on the day of the pitch, but my point still remains:</p>
<p>Formulating idea in head for 3+ years – good!</p>
<p>Spent the last year working intensely on logline &amp; synopsis – good!</p>
<p>wrote script in 1-2 weeks (was it one or two?) and delivered it to the industry – are you insane?!?</p>
<p>Am I the only one who thinks this? Are there any other professional writers reading this, or am I the only one? Help me out here guys!</p>
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		By: Mark		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mark]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Aug 2012 17:08:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1274&quot;&gt;Paul C&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks Paul. There are so many different visa types. It&#039;s well worth looking into them all. Some are easier to get than others but worth the pain of trawling through endless info. Google and a few websites will become your best friend. It&#039;s worth it in the end.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1274">Paul C</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks Paul. There are so many different visa types. It&#8217;s well worth looking into them all. Some are easier to get than others but worth the pain of trawling through endless info. Google and a few websites will become your best friend. It&#8217;s worth it in the end.</p>
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		By: Paul C		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Aug 2012 09:42:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great story. An inspiration to us all.

Can I ask, how did you get a visa? I have often daydreamed about such a move but always came back to the same problem - needing a visa. Or more importantly, needing a job to get a visa.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great story. An inspiration to us all.</p>
<p>Can I ask, how did you get a visa? I have often daydreamed about such a move but always came back to the same problem &#8211; needing a visa. Or more importantly, needing a job to get a visa.</p>
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		By: Mark		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mark]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Aug 2012 06:01:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1272&quot;&gt;Mark&lt;/a&gt;.

To be fair, Clive, this was an idea that has been formulating in my head for 3+ years. I&#039;ve also spent the last year working intensely on the my logline &#038; synopsis, and gotten feedback from other writers for improvements. So know it was no 2minute noodle idea.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1272">Mark</a>.</p>
<p>To be fair, Clive, this was an idea that has been formulating in my head for 3+ years. I&#8217;ve also spent the last year working intensely on the my logline &amp; synopsis, and gotten feedback from other writers for improvements. So know it was no 2minute noodle idea.</p>
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		By: Mark		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mark]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Aug 2012 05:47:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1271&quot;&gt;Clive Hopkins&lt;/a&gt;.

Point taken. Know this is not how I normally approach my writing, but I will continue to learn, forge ahead, grow and develop. I originally had five to pitch, stuck with one - it worked as I got company interest. But the others I will now write before going further and will indeed do with all my scripts. While this one, will be rewritten and improved all the time whether they bite or not. I know what I need to do and I will do it. :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1271">Clive Hopkins</a>.</p>
<p>Point taken. Know this is not how I normally approach my writing, but I will continue to learn, forge ahead, grow and develop. I originally had five to pitch, stuck with one &#8211; it worked as I got company interest. But the others I will now write before going further and will indeed do with all my scripts. While this one, will be rewritten and improved all the time whether they bite or not. I know what I need to do and I will do it. :-)</p>
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		By: Clive Hopkins		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Aug 2012 00:52:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1270&quot;&gt;Mark&lt;/a&gt;.

You can write a script in a day if someone puts a gun to your head. But my point is, why would anybody in the industry want to read it?


Perhaps you could print &#039;It can easily be rewritten and knocked further into shape&#039; on the front of all your scripts, just in case an industry reader thought that what you&#039;ve submitted is your best work.


Seriously, though, this blog taps in the idea (very popular amongst beginners) that screenwriting is all about coming up with a brilliant idea that might make a cool film (&#039;the hard bit&#039;) and then banging out a screenplay in a week (&#039;the easy bit&#039;). It&#039;s not like that. It&#039;s the other way around. If you don&#039;t believe me, ask yourself this. Why are writers paid the big money for the actual writing, rather than the coming up with the brilliant cool ideas?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1270">Mark</a>.</p>
<p>You can write a script in a day if someone puts a gun to your head. But my point is, why would anybody in the industry want to read it?</p>
<p>Perhaps you could print &#8216;It can easily be rewritten and knocked further into shape&#8217; on the front of all your scripts, just in case an industry reader thought that what you&#8217;ve submitted is your best work.</p>
<p>Seriously, though, this blog taps in the idea (very popular amongst beginners) that screenwriting is all about coming up with a brilliant idea that might make a cool film (&#8216;the hard bit&#8217;) and then banging out a screenplay in a week (&#8216;the easy bit&#8217;). It&#8217;s not like that. It&#8217;s the other way around. If you don&#8217;t believe me, ask yourself this. Why are writers paid the big money for the actual writing, rather than the coming up with the brilliant cool ideas?</p>
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		By: Mark		</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Aug 2012 23:29:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1268&quot;&gt;Clive Hopkins&lt;/a&gt;.

Was never my intention for it to go this way, Clive. I merely wanted to see if my idea/s had wings first. They did. I had always wanted to have a finished screenplay before the event but well, life. Having said that, if you actually structure a screenplay correctly using the techniques required and needed, it can easily be done in a week. Would I have liked more time to go back and clean it up, yes. But we shall see if Hollywood like what I have or not. It can easily be rewritten and knocked further into shape. I&#039;ll keep you posted. ;-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/ozzywood-to-hollywood-part-deux/#comment-1268">Clive Hopkins</a>.</p>
<p>Was never my intention for it to go this way, Clive. I merely wanted to see if my idea/s had wings first. They did. I had always wanted to have a finished screenplay before the event but well, life. Having said that, if you actually structure a screenplay correctly using the techniques required and needed, it can easily be done in a week. Would I have liked more time to go back and clean it up, yes. But we shall see if Hollywood like what I have or not. It can easily be rewritten and knocked further into shape. I&#8217;ll keep you posted. ;-)</p>
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