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		By: Global Eye Media		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Excellent tips. We need book adaptation spec screenwriter for a new action-packed spy thriller, and would welcome constructive feedback on the subjects. Thanks.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent tips. We need book adaptation spec screenwriter for a new action-packed spy thriller, and would welcome constructive feedback on the subjects. Thanks.</p>
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		By: Margaret MM		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 15 May 2010 22:33:13 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[So what about &quot;The Screenwriters Bible&quot; approach to querying, which puts the logline and summary at the top of the letter?  My understanding is that the less chatty and the more to-the-point your query letter is the better.  

Obviously, if you have something to address directly to the person you&#039;re querying (i.e. So and so recommended I contact you or I think you&#039;d be interested in &quot;title&quot; because) but what about a completely cold query?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So what about &#8220;The Screenwriters Bible&#8221; approach to querying, which puts the logline and summary at the top of the letter?  My understanding is that the less chatty and the more to-the-point your query letter is the better.  </p>
<p>Obviously, if you have something to address directly to the person you&#8217;re querying (i.e. So and so recommended I contact you or I think you&#8217;d be interested in &#8220;title&#8221; because) but what about a completely cold query?</p>
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		By: Jeanne Veillette Bowerman		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 14 May 2010 14:19:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great advice, David.  We&#039;re thrilled to have Nevada on #scriptchat this weekend.  Maybe you can pop in too for a special appearance ;) 

Living on the East Coast, I&#039;ve done both live pitchfests in LA and used Virtual Pitch Fest.  There&#039;s nothing like your services to gain access without leaving my home or spending a ton of money.  Thanks for bringing Hollywood to our laptops.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great advice, David.  We&#8217;re thrilled to have Nevada on #scriptchat this weekend.  Maybe you can pop in too for a special appearance ;) </p>
<p>Living on the East Coast, I&#8217;ve done both live pitchfests in LA and used Virtual Pitch Fest.  There&#8217;s nothing like your services to gain access without leaving my home or spending a ton of money.  Thanks for bringing Hollywood to our laptops.</p>
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