Feature Analysis


Expert feedback on all relevant aspects of your script: concept, character, POV, style, scene design, etc.
In a Skype consultation of up to two hours, Karel Segers will talk you through the best next steps and a development strategy to final draft.
Available to anyone, anywhere in the world.



Book in conjunction with the Story Diagnosis and save $100(*)!

Comprehensive script and story analysis on a full screenplay draft.

– Story analysis: concept, genre, character, POV and structure notes.
– Script feedback: style, formatting, dialogue and scene design.
This is discussed during a telephone or Skype consultation of up to two hours, during which you will get recommendations for the next draft or a development strategy to final draft.
– Purpose:
– to prepare the script for marketing to producers
– to confirm direction in early development

How it works…

Step 1: make payment 

– fee: $550 (request your $55 discount code for follow-ups)
– methods accepted: PayPal, Bank Transfer, Credit Card

Step 2: download the Screenplay Checklist

Once payment has cleared, you will receive a  confirmation with the download link for your free copy of the Screenplay Checklist.

Step 3: send your screenplay

Once you have reviewed the script using the Checklist, please email it to Karel together with the logline & synopsis if you have them. Include your Skype ID (**).

Step 4: schedule the Skype session

Karel will get in touch via email to propose a few dates and times for the session.
These will most likely fall within 7am and 7pm Sydney time.

Step 5: let’s talk about your script!

On the day, Karel will call you at the designated time. He will record the session and send you a download link, so you don’t need to frantically note everything down. (***)

(*) To get the discount, add both items to your cart and use the coupon code “SCRIPTPACK”.
(**) Customers in the US without a Skype account can call in to (310) 928 1111.
Customers in Australia without Skype account can call in to (02) 6176 1222.
(***) The call recording is not a contractual item. No claims are accepted for failure to deliver.
That said, in five years and hundreds of calls, only one recording failed.




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