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		By: Chaka		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Chaka]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2015 11:35:06 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-900&quot;&gt;Anthony Peterson&lt;/a&gt;.

That&#039;s a good list.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-900">Anthony Peterson</a>.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s a good list.</p>
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		By: Lance		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lance]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2015 22:12:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-333828&quot;&gt;Karel Segers&lt;/a&gt;.

Thank you!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-333828">Karel Segers</a>.</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>
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		By: Karel Segers		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2015 21:53:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-333826&quot;&gt;Lance&lt;/a&gt;.

Yes, you can print dialogue semi-phonetically for the odd slang line. However, many readers prefer a neutral - or softened - spelling for main characters, as continued slang may impede the reading. In this case you precede the dialogue with a note &quot;Brenda speaks with a thick Irish accent.&quot;]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-333826">Lance</a>.</p>
<p>Yes, you can print dialogue semi-phonetically for the odd slang line. However, many readers prefer a neutral &#8211; or softened &#8211; spelling for main characters, as continued slang may impede the reading. In this case you precede the dialogue with a note &#8220;Brenda speaks with a thick Irish accent.&#8221;</p>
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		By: Lance		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lance]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2015 21:11:19 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I have a quick question on misspellings? When writing dialogue between characters that use slang, is it OK to spell the words/ slang the way that they sound? For instance, &quot;We gotta bounce.&quot; As opposed to, &quot;We have got to bounce.&quot; Or another example might be, &quot;What cha doin&#039;?&quot; As opposed to &quot;What are you doing?&quot;]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have a quick question on misspellings? When writing dialogue between characters that use slang, is it OK to spell the words/ slang the way that they sound? For instance, &#8220;We gotta bounce.&#8221; As opposed to, &#8220;We have got to bounce.&#8221; Or another example might be, &#8220;What cha doin&#8217;?&#8221; As opposed to &#8220;What are you doing?&#8221;</p>
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		By: Pete		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Pete]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2015 16:57:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[As to Red Flag 4, Too Many Characters: 
What about features like \&quot;A League of Their Own,\&quot; \&quot;The Replacements,\&quot; \&quot;Major League,\&quot; and others, including \&quot;It\&#039;s  A Mad, Mad, Mad World?\&quot; Over the top, big, broad comedies seem to have \&quot;too many characters,\&quot; but can be extremely successful.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As to Red Flag 4, Too Many Characters:<br />
What about features like \&#8221;A League of Their Own,\&#8221; \&#8221;The Replacements,\&#8221; \&#8221;Major League,\&#8221; and others, including \&#8221;It\&#8217;s  A Mad, Mad, Mad World?\&#8221; Over the top, big, broad comedies seem to have \&#8221;too many characters,\&#8221; but can be extremely successful.</p>
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		By: Huw		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Huw]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2015 00:23:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-897&quot;&gt;Clive Hopkins&lt;/a&gt;.

Actually there was a blog on here last week by a working writer of some quite famous movies who disagrees with you about thoughts. Frankly I do to. But you can&#039;t over use it and it is only so the actor knows how to express themselves. 

I guess an easy way to think of it is, a thought process at a particular time is like a back story to be expressed by the actor, not in words, but expressions and behaviour.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-897">Clive Hopkins</a>.</p>
<p>Actually there was a blog on here last week by a working writer of some quite famous movies who disagrees with you about thoughts. Frankly I do to. But you can&#8217;t over use it and it is only so the actor knows how to express themselves. </p>
<p>I guess an easy way to think of it is, a thought process at a particular time is like a back story to be expressed by the actor, not in words, but expressions and behaviour.</p>
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		By: michael		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[michael]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 May 2015 12:12:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-332323&quot;&gt;Karel Segers&lt;/a&gt;.

In that case I have to say well done on an exceptionally well written, and informative, article!

I couldn&#039;t write so eloquently in another language. 

Thanks, Karel!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-332323">Karel Segers</a>.</p>
<p>In that case I have to say well done on an exceptionally well written, and informative, article!</p>
<p>I couldn&#8217;t write so eloquently in another language. </p>
<p>Thanks, Karel!</p>
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		By: Karel Segers		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 May 2015 08:07:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-332322&quot;&gt;michael&lt;/a&gt;.

Thanks Michael.

When I saw the comment in my email box (before seeing which article), I feared it was my own mistake, as it would be typical for me - I&#039;m not a native English speaker...

I&#039;ve learned something today, too. Thanks!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-10-red-flags-of-the-amateur-script-1/#comment-332322">michael</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks Michael.</p>
<p>When I saw the comment in my email box (before seeing which article), I feared it was my own mistake, as it would be typical for me &#8211; I&#8217;m not a native English speaker&#8230;</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve learned something today, too. Thanks!</p>
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		By: michael		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[michael]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 23 May 2015 23:12:44 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[4. The correct grammar is &#039;fewer characters&#039;, not &#039;less characters&#039;. 

Red flag.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>4. The correct grammar is &#8216;fewer characters&#8217;, not &#8216;less characters&#8217;. </p>
<p>Red flag.</p>
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