Comments on: In Late, Out Early https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-in-late-out-early-2/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Wed, 24 Jul 2019 14:43:27 +0000 hourly 1 By: Jean-Marie MAZALEYRAT https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-in-late-out-early-2/#comment-366499 Wed, 24 Jul 2019 14:43:27 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=16731#comment-366499 ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ PULP FICTION is probably the best example of how "In early, out late" and totally off-topic dialogue can be at the basement of a masterpiece ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก: https://www.facebook.com/watch/?v=2003221713076016]]> Not convinced Karel. To me, the revelation of The Jokers’ backstory is just dull exposition. To the opposite, ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ PULP FICTION is probably the best example of how “In early, out late” and totally off-topic dialogue can be at the basement of a masterpiece ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก: https://www.facebook.com/watch/?v=2003221713076016

]]> By: Phyllis Foundis https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-in-late-out-early-2/#comment-943 Sun, 27 Mar 2011 08:58:10 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=16731#comment-943 Love this article, Karel. Relevant, wise and ‘easy’ to apply to our scripts. Damn, are you a script editor? Px

]]> By: Karel Segers https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-in-late-out-early-2/#comment-942 Sat, 26 Mar 2011 01:51:08 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=16731#comment-942 In reply to Sam.

Would you mind elaborating?

]]> By: Sam https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-in-late-out-early-2/#comment-941 Fri, 25 Mar 2011 13:54:17 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=16731#comment-941 You’re forgetting the function of the scene. So you lose credibility with your analysis.

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