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		By: Karel FG Segers		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel FG Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2025 02:19:37 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-382322&quot;&gt;Anthony&lt;/a&gt;.

Can you find a few examples of other films or TV episodes that have a similar sequence? 
What films do you like that have people getting to know each other, before jumping to a point later in life?
That may give you an idea on how you could do it.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-382322">Anthony</a>.</p>
<p>Can you find a few examples of other films or TV episodes that have a similar sequence?<br />
What films do you like that have people getting to know each other, before jumping to a point later in life?<br />
That may give you an idea on how you could do it.</p>
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		By: Anthony		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Anthony]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jan 2025 19:07:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi!

Hopefully you still check this. I&#039;m a newbie. The goal is to show the history of a couple starting with them knowing each other since they were children, then jumping to different points in their lives (each showing the build up of their relationship) so for example. We see him and his family move in and the girl is on her front lawn playing with her sister (first time they see each other) then jumps to a scene where he his in school getting lunch, someone bumps into him which causes him to drop his food. She gives him her&#039;s, next jump they are seniors and he is building up the courage to ask her to prom, jumps to college and she is in the bathroom with a pregnancy test, etc. How would I write this in my screenplay? Thanks!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi!</p>
<p>Hopefully you still check this. I&#8217;m a newbie. The goal is to show the history of a couple starting with them knowing each other since they were children, then jumping to different points in their lives (each showing the build up of their relationship) so for example. We see him and his family move in and the girl is on her front lawn playing with her sister (first time they see each other) then jumps to a scene where he his in school getting lunch, someone bumps into him which causes him to drop his food. She gives him her&#8217;s, next jump they are seniors and he is building up the courage to ask her to prom, jumps to college and she is in the bathroom with a pregnancy test, etc. How would I write this in my screenplay? Thanks!</p>
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		By: Karel FG Segers		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-369725</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel FG Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Nov 2021 02:00:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-369580&quot;&gt;Mark&lt;/a&gt;.

Hey Mark - Sorry about the late reply! But yes, you can do that in scene description. However, I know professional writers who would write INT. CLASSROOM - DAY1 etc.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-369580">Mark</a>.</p>
<p>Hey Mark &#8211; Sorry about the late reply! But yes, you can do that in scene description. However, I know professional writers who would write INT. CLASSROOM &#8211; DAY1 etc.</p>
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		By: Mark		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mark]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Oct 2021 16:20:06 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[What if you want to show the passing of time day to day in the same location for example:

1) INT. CLASSROOM - DAY

If I wanted the next scene to be in the same location, but it&#039;s the next day how do I show that? Would I write in the scene description &quot;It is the next day?&quot;]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What if you want to show the passing of time day to day in the same location for example:</p>
<p>1) INT. CLASSROOM &#8211; DAY</p>
<p>If I wanted the next scene to be in the same location, but it&#8217;s the next day how do I show that? Would I write in the scene description &#8220;It is the next day?&#8221;</p>
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		By: Oleapback		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Oleapback]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Apr 2021 14:53:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-345317&quot;&gt;Andrew&lt;/a&gt;.

It&#039;s better you use the characters in the scene to express which time has passed. LATER should be the time and you can also udeta montage instead]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-345317">Andrew</a>.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s better you use the characters in the scene to express which time has passed. LATER should be the time and you can also udeta montage instead</p>
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		By: Alex Flaster		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-366730</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Alex Flaster]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Apr 2020 16:47:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m writing a screenplay where the story is being told between the protagonist and a reporter (similar to Verbal and Agent Cujan in Usual Suspects).  But the bulk of the story is a flashback that takes place over 6 months leading up to a climactic event the day before that meeting with the reporter.  To add confusion, when we are in that 6 month timeline, we are flashing backwards to give the backstory of our main characters.  So we have a present day timeline, a 6 month timeline where the bulk of the story takes place and within that 6 month timeline we occasionally flash back to provide backstories.  If you were watching this, it wouldn&#039;t be confusing, but I&#039;m having a hard time writing this in the scene headings in a way that is clear and consistent.  Any suggestions would be appreciated.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m writing a screenplay where the story is being told between the protagonist and a reporter (similar to Verbal and Agent Cujan in Usual Suspects).  But the bulk of the story is a flashback that takes place over 6 months leading up to a climactic event the day before that meeting with the reporter.  To add confusion, when we are in that 6 month timeline, we are flashing backwards to give the backstory of our main characters.  So we have a present day timeline, a 6 month timeline where the bulk of the story takes place and within that 6 month timeline we occasionally flash back to provide backstories.  If you were watching this, it wouldn&#8217;t be confusing, but I&#8217;m having a hard time writing this in the scene headings in a way that is clear and consistent.  Any suggestions would be appreciated.</p>
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		By: kelly		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[kelly]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Apr 2019 21:25:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Need info on flashbacks within flashbacks for script]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Need info on flashbacks within flashbacks for script</p>
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		By: Karel Segers		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-365972</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Apr 2019 00:32:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-365970&quot;&gt;Dallas Ryan Roberts&lt;/a&gt;.

It wouldn&#039;t in my books, as it reads more like a novel.

A screenplay is partially a technical document, and your suggestion buries an important productional element (the time jump) in narrative text.

I feel that you absolutely need to isolate it as a separate element.

I hope this helps!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-365970">Dallas Ryan Roberts</a>.</p>
<p>It wouldn&#8217;t in my books, as it reads more like a novel.</p>
<p>A screenplay is partially a technical document, and your suggestion buries an important productional element (the time jump) in narrative text.</p>
<p>I feel that you absolutely need to isolate it as a separate element.</p>
<p>I hope this helps!</p>
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		By: Dallas Ryan Roberts		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Dallas Ryan Roberts]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Apr 2019 22:04:47 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi Karel, 

I know you said to put &#039;LATER&#039; in the script. Would it also be okay to put in the action, &#039;two hours later, he still waits for the man to show up.&#039;   Would that be okay as well?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Karel, </p>
<p>I know you said to put &#8216;LATER&#8217; in the script. Would it also be okay to put in the action, &#8216;two hours later, he still waits for the man to show up.&#8217;   Would that be okay as well?</p>
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		By: Karel Segers		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-script-check-use-of-time/#comment-351957</link>

		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Dec 2018 06:30:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Without more context, this is hard to say. What you describe sounds like an important process, and montage may not give it due importance. If this is supposed to happen over the course of Act 1, there are typically plenty of other things you need to set up as well. So all you really need is to work about 3 scenes into the act where you make the point of the antagonist infiltrating, and these scenes can have other functions as well. Montage is not always a good solution, because it is expensive because of the numerous setups resulting in only little screen time, and it is usually also devoid of emotion.
I hope this all makes sense. :)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Without more context, this is hard to say. What you describe sounds like an important process, and montage may not give it due importance. If this is supposed to happen over the course of Act 1, there are typically plenty of other things you need to set up as well. So all you really need is to work about 3 scenes into the act where you make the point of the antagonist infiltrating, and these scenes can have other functions as well. Montage is not always a good solution, because it is expensive because of the numerous setups resulting in only little screen time, and it is usually also devoid of emotion.<br />
I hope this all makes sense. :)</p>
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