Comments on: The Judges: Week 10 https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-the-judges-week-10/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Wed, 23 Mar 2011 06:46:08 +0000 hourly 1 By: David https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-the-judges-week-10/#comment-982 Wed, 23 Mar 2011 06:46:08 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=17017#comment-982 Maiden Voyage – it’s instructive to note the least original premise is not the least seductive.

]]> By: Ian https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-the-judges-week-10/#comment-981 Mon, 21 Mar 2011 12:28:38 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=17017#comment-981 ‘Comedy of errors’… How many times has that been used in a logline? I agree with Nina – it doesn’t sound like fun.

Maiden Voyage sounds more like something I’d see.

Nice work, judges!

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