Comments on: The Judges: Week 14 https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-the-judges-week-14/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Mon, 25 Apr 2011 10:55:54 +0000 hourly 1 By: David https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-the-judges-week-14/#comment-994 Mon, 25 Apr 2011 10:55:54 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=17943#comment-994 1 – could work but sloppily written

2 – paraphrase – “no chance of a happy ending when hero both finds love and overcomes his grief” ?? Where is the sense in that?

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