Comments on: Write Your World (2) https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-write-your-world-2/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Wed, 09 Jan 2013 14:00:00 +0000 hourly 1 By: joe velikovsky https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-write-your-world-2/#comment-1040 Wed, 09 Jan 2013 14:00:00 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=18931#comment-1040 Nice!!!
Great examples too Margaret – thanks for writing this.
All very inspiring.
Amazing how reading a well-written screenplay will inspire you.
ie – Minimalism in words, yet so `punchy’ in impact…(!)

I also always find, looking closely at `edits’ in films (which – can be hard to do if the edits are as `seamless’ as they usually are, in highly-commercial, popular films… the old/classic irony – about `the best Film Editing is: invisible’) makes me think about how to `write a line, per shot’ too.
(Sort of suggestively, `directing’ from the page, yet – without actually overtly `directing from the page’…)

Anyway, great stuff!

Cheers

JT Velikovsky
High ROI Film/Story/Screenplay Consultant
https://storyality.wordpress.com/

]]> By: Ed Love https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-write-your-world-2/#comment-1039 Sun, 26 Jun 2011 00:37:15 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=18931#comment-1039 Very consise, thanks for writing this!

]]> By: Jack Brislee https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-write-your-world-2/#comment-1038 Thu, 23 Jun 2011 02:23:33 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=18931#comment-1038 Great article, Margaret, with excellent examples. It’s good to see a holiday in the States hasn’t slowed you down.

]]> By: Screenwriting - Write Your World | The Story Department https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-write-your-world-2/#comment-1037 Wed, 22 Jun 2011 09:12:30 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=18931#comment-1037 […] (Go to Part 2 of this article) […]

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