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	Comments on: Structure: Ghost World	</title>
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		By: Filipe		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/structure-ghost-world/#comment-19</link>

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					<description><![CDATA[I really like the iniciative on your site. I&#039;d like to sugest you to use the same structure Robert Mckee used on page 10 of this https://www.4shared.com/document/eoi4rX4p/Mckee_BrasilStoryWorkbook.html to swhow the sequences and acts.
 It&#039;s better to see the sequences apart.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really like the iniciative on your site. I&#8217;d like to sugest you to use the same structure Robert Mckee used on page 10 of this <a href="https://www.4shared.com/document/eoi4rX4p/Mckee_BrasilStoryWorkbook.html" rel="nofollow ugc">https://www.4shared.com/document/eoi4rX4p/Mckee_BrasilStoryWorkbook.html</a> to swhow the sequences and acts.<br />
 It&#8217;s better to see the sequences apart.</p>
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		By: storydude		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/structure-ghost-world/#comment-18</link>

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		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Aug 2009 22:34:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Bonjour Guillaume!

This is an interesting one. I&#039;m really keen to hear your opinion.

I love Ghost World, but I don&#039;t think it is an obvious example of a typical successful film structure.

Now that I&#039;m looking at this structure again, I&#039;m wondering if Act Three shouldn&#039;t start with Sequence I. Enid has just admitted to herself that she needs others by telling them she wants to move in. Then in Sequence I she is packing, ready to move on.

Anyhow, here&#039;s my go at Enid&#039;s journeys:

Inner Journey: to grow up and move on from her &quot;cocoon&quot; relationship with Becky.

Outer Journey: to perpetuate her teenage life outside mainstream society.

Romantic Journey: to grow from a platonic to a sexual bond with Seymour.

Antagonist: mainstream society, represented by her art teacher

What do you think?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bonjour Guillaume!</p>
<p>This is an interesting one. I&#8217;m really keen to hear your opinion.</p>
<p>I love Ghost World, but I don&#8217;t think it is an obvious example of a typical successful film structure.</p>
<p>Now that I&#8217;m looking at this structure again, I&#8217;m wondering if Act Three shouldn&#8217;t start with Sequence I. Enid has just admitted to herself that she needs others by telling them she wants to move in. Then in Sequence I she is packing, ready to move on.</p>
<p>Anyhow, here&#8217;s my go at Enid&#8217;s journeys:</p>
<p>Inner Journey: to grow up and move on from her &#8220;cocoon&#8221; relationship with Becky.</p>
<p>Outer Journey: to perpetuate her teenage life outside mainstream society.</p>
<p>Romantic Journey: to grow from a platonic to a sexual bond with Seymour.</p>
<p>Antagonist: mainstream society, represented by her art teacher</p>
<p>What do you think?</p>
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		By: cole		</title>
		<link>https://www.thestorydepartment.com/structure-ghost-world/#comment-17</link>

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		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Aug 2009 15:27:47 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Hi !

Interesting work.

I&#039;d like to know your opinion about the Challenge for Enid.
I mean, what is her Inner, Outer, romantic and Greater antagonism ?

I have my own opinion, but i&#039;d like to hear yours before.

Thanks !

Guillaume]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi !</p>
<p>Interesting work.</p>
<p>I&#8217;d like to know your opinion about the Challenge for Enid.<br />
I mean, what is her Inner, Outer, romantic and Greater antagonism ?</p>
<p>I have my own opinion, but i&#8217;d like to hear yours before.</p>
<p>Thanks !</p>
<p>Guillaume</p>
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