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		<title>[Video]: Doing Exposition with Explosives</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jamie Wynen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Sep 2014 02:12:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Have you found yourself faced with the dilemma of choosing between brutally dull exposition or confusing your audience by throwing them into the story in medias res (that is, without any context)? Take a trip back through the annals of time and film to The Road Warrior, and watch a detailed breakdown of the storytelling ... <a title="[Video]: Doing Exposition with Explosives" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/video-exposition-explosives/" aria-label="Read more about [Video]: Doing Exposition with Explosives">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3> Have you found yourself faced with the dilemma of choosing between brutally dull exposition or confusing your audience by throwing them into the story <em>in medias res</em> (that is, without any context)? </p>
<p>Take a trip back through the annals of time and film to The Road Warrior, and watch a detailed breakdown of the storytelling hidden within an action-packed opening sequence. </h3>
<p>[vimeo 67251879 w=1500 h=600]</p>
<h4>If you liked this, check out <a href="https://thestorydepartment.com/category/video/">more videos about screenwriting or filmmaking</a>. And if you know of a great video on Screenwriting, let us know in the comments. Thanks!</h4>
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		<title>Best of the Web 18 Aug</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jamie Campbell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Aug 2013 23:55:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Story &#38; Structure :: The Four Types of People Most Likely to Murder Their Families :: Is Any Exposition Scene a &#8220;Crock of Sh*t&#8221;? :: Scene Description Spotlight: &#8216;Wall-E&#8217; :: Scene Description Spotlight: &#8216;Saving Private Ryan]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h2>Story &amp; Structure</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/qmNsmQ9rgZ">The Four Types of People Most Likely to Murder Their Families</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/QjF7g9EQ7x">Is Any Exposition Scene a &#8220;Crock of Sh*t&#8221;?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/aKXFr2IOOh">Scene Description Spotlight: &#8216;Wall-E&#8217;</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/4O2Zuwu2n2">Scene Description Spotlight: &#8216;Saving Private Ryan<'/a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/uEqv8EZivx">Oblivion: From Concept To The Screen</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/FLlYPAbn8R">The Prestige and Ambiguity</a></p>
<h2>Script Perfection</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/jzf245FyhU">How Professional Writers Structure Their Scripts</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/uwfnHzpk52">30 Indispensable Writing Tips From Famous Authors</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/mOgn7JfIIa">Why Save the Cat Didn&#8217;t Destroy Screenwriting</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/TlIBhONGOV">Scriptnotes, Ep 102: Hits, Misses and Hedge Funds</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/qBONSOXfOA">10 Screenwriting Tips from Sunset Boulevard</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/VQvgOsu3hg">Screenwriter Interview &#8211; Alex Felix (Part 1)</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/sWsxLwY2Xl">Busy</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/sMXvoGaQqt">The Self-Defeating Quest for Simple and Easy</a></p>
<h2>Pitching &amp; Selling</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/8WnjfXUMob">I Will Not Read Your Fucking Script</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/7rlxw3G4M4">Does Feedback on Your Screenplay Equal Disappointment?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/dfGLKNjdzO">Universal Posts $1.8B Best Year Ever At International Box Office</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/uhFSm6BMBS">Scott Neustadter and Michael Weber on  How Execs Should Talk to Writers</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/LxZaD1yE5u">25 Steps to Being a Traditionally Published Author</a></p>
<h2>Best of the Rest</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/0l7uWHxKI9">What does the future hold for Pixar Animation Studios?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/wF3QySjP7M">Did You Know That Most Hollywood Screenwriters Used To Be Women?</A><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/JalCLvTdX2">Movie Review &#8211; Elysium</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/qdJ5qU6Yux">Brad Bird, Damon Lindelof Explore the Secrets of ‘Tommorowland’</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/k8jhknXYx6">Interview: Jeffrey Lieber — Part 1</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/ZWv1f2AShT">See Badger’s Star Trek Story, Animated</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/eWEOmDXoY0">Ray Liotta Set For Crime Thriller &#8216;Violent Talent&#8217;</a><br />
_______________________________</p>
<p>With thanks to Jamie Campbell.</p>
<p>Enjoy!</p>
<p>Karel</p>
<div class="saboxplugin-wrap" itemtype="http://schema.org/Person" itemscope itemprop="author"><div class="saboxplugin-tab"><div class="saboxplugin-gravatar"><img alt='Jamie Campbell' src='https://secure.gravatar.com/avatar/28ffdb9b85fb4120857e279896be72f2f3471c2b71b8503c62c9332acec351d1?s=100&#038;d=mm&#038;r=g' srcset='https://secure.gravatar.com/avatar/28ffdb9b85fb4120857e279896be72f2f3471c2b71b8503c62c9332acec351d1?s=200&#038;d=mm&#038;r=g 2x' class='avatar avatar-100 photo' height='100' width='100' itemprop="image"/></div><div class="saboxplugin-authorname"><a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/author/jamie-campbell/" class="vcard author" rel="author"><span class="fn">Jamie Campbell</span></a></div><div class="saboxplugin-desc"><div itemprop="description"><p><a href="https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1490439390/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=390957&amp;creativeASIN=1490439390&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;tag=thestorydept-20"></a><a href="https://www.jamiecampbell.com.au/">Jamie Campbell</a> is an author, screenwriter, and television addict.</p>
<p>Jamie is proud to be an Editor for The Story Department.</p>
<p>Her latest series <a href="https://jamiecampbell.com.au/the-project-integrate-series/">Project Integrate</a> is out now.</p>
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		<title>Best of the Web 5 May</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jamie Campbell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 May 2013 23:33:35 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Story &#38; Structure :: Exposition :: Storytelling Strategies: The Puzzle in Silver Linings Playbook :: Know Who You Are Writing For :: Some Thoughts on the Legends of Villainy :: How to Write a Screenplay &#8211; Right Now! :: Interview: &#8216;Oblivion&#8217; Director Joseph Kosinski on Sci-Fi Filmmaking :: Character Arcs (or the lack thereof) and ... <a title="Best of the Web 5 May" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/best-of-the-web-5-may/" aria-label="Read more about Best of the Web 5 May">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h2>Story &amp; Structure</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/MdwvLCjNi7">Exposition</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/kvXlPpO4Qk">Storytelling Strategies: The Puzzle in Silver Linings Playbook</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/wTqMnQfQZn">Know Who You Are Writing For</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/QPfbI1WYqd">Some Thoughts on the Legends of Villainy</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/CRXIphCadp">How to Write a Screenplay &#8211; Right Now!</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/7GW29n65up">Interview: &#8216;Oblivion&#8217; Director Joseph Kosinski on Sci-Fi Filmmaking</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/RJtIPNjze0">Character Arcs (or the lack thereof) and ‘The Fugitive’</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/LCRXVUfqEY">Screenplay Review: Shazam</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/NH4nvQQwwj">Screenplay Review: The Bling Ring</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/7uyNaB2voC">Script To Screen: &#8220;Scream&#8221;</a></p>
<h2>Script Perfection</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/J4uuHBHLW9">Writing vs. Speaking</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/rZuT0NpwZc">Writing Madly &#8211; Then Getting Organized</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/BvCetVe2ET">You Need the Truth</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/crxdpKFyEk">Scriptcat Cooks Up 3 Even Tastier Survival Tips for Your Screenwriting Journey</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/S8EyBMWPnb">Writing Habits – Facing Down the Repeat</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/2jnpNCF7OB">Create a Professional Read by Learning the Art of Writing Film Narrative</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/PtSYnVrzUv">Scriptnotes, 87: Moving On is not Giving Up</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/qQDKoCjT3K">TV Writer Podcast 075</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Y78LNNdMIP">Resources for Starting Your Script</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Fp1fs0mRoy">Persona Character Development Software</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/7kEnz4BKCP">Transcript of Scriptnotes: Ep. 86</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/GxornMmVQy">A Story Idea Each Day for a Month</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/yIkG6O1qoO">You&#8217;re Fired: Doug Richardson &#8211; screenwriter &#8211; Die Hard 2, Bad Boys</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/tXbg1N5lzO">The Marital Art of a Writing Community</a></p>
<h2>Pitching &amp; Selling</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/xMc3RjweEg">Hear Me Discuss Amazon Studios on The Broken Projector Podcast</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/h8FAyGcNmY">On Sluglines and Other Matters</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/hZbUBhEBcx">The Cost of Location</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/fYIQDIIbfa">Ideas are Free to Steal?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/mCKyz2vArt">What Writers Earn: A Cultural Myth</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/ddbW6CmZqT">April 2013 Pitch Market Roundup</a></p>
<h2>Best of the Rest</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/ZBT9SAq2G5">Bay Gets More Serious and More Absurd with &#8216;Pain &#038; Gain&#8217;</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/NHXe3RnV6o">Interview: Nikole Beckwith &#8211; 2012 Nicholl Winner, 2012 Black List</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/LlXsW3kEmg">9 Classic Movies That The Cast or Crew Thought Were Garbage</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/vPzbY6tQXu">Interview: J.J. Abrams</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/EjzpGs3b4B">Summer Movies Preview</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/o65GA0ismU">Why Iron Man 3’s Director Ruled Hollywood</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/7LtLwFYXgA">Steven Soderbergh: The State of Cinema</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/MRNdlBukw7">Screenwriting Opinion &#8211; Soderbergh&#8217;s Rant</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/XO41xFDsiV">Watch: Awesome Con Footage from del Toro&#8217;s &#8216;Pacific Rim&#8217; Online</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/3XMk9OgZvZ">What Makes The Great Gatsby Great?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/4QzZqXHZdK">Scott Stuber Boards Gears of War Feature Film</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/AlsOax4sjZ">Screenwriter &#8211; Christopher McQuarrie Career Interview</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Ko0KOCKI3G">Iron Man 3 Poster and 16 Minutes of Behind-The-Scenes Footage</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Pt5Yb2NWhc">How Would You Like To Own a Private IMAX Theater in Your Home?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/09XlwIW7PD">Another Superb Sci-Fi Short &#8216;ABE&#8217; with Creepy Robot</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/SxDDxAHfhL">Writer/Director Vanessa Parise on Going Behind the Camera for ‘The Wedding Chapel’</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/unZmisbcjW">Brit Marling Reteaming with &#8216;Another Earth&#8217; Director for &#8216;I Origins&#8217;</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/c4o9gHfS69">&#8216;Ender’s Game’: Battle room, Mazer Rackham in First Footage</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/LFvUGG8Tdf">This Is How 30,000 People Write A Movie</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/uAgkubF4KE">Which Movie is Your Happy Place?</a><br />
_______________________________</p>
<p>With thanks to Jamie Campbell.</p>
<p>Enjoy!</p>
<p>Karel</p>
<div class="saboxplugin-wrap" itemtype="http://schema.org/Person" itemscope itemprop="author"><div class="saboxplugin-tab"><div class="saboxplugin-gravatar"><img alt='Jamie Campbell' src='https://secure.gravatar.com/avatar/28ffdb9b85fb4120857e279896be72f2f3471c2b71b8503c62c9332acec351d1?s=100&#038;d=mm&#038;r=g' srcset='https://secure.gravatar.com/avatar/28ffdb9b85fb4120857e279896be72f2f3471c2b71b8503c62c9332acec351d1?s=200&#038;d=mm&#038;r=g 2x' class='avatar avatar-100 photo' height='100' width='100' itemprop="image"/></div><div class="saboxplugin-authorname"><a href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/author/jamie-campbell/" class="vcard author" rel="author"><span class="fn">Jamie Campbell</span></a></div><div class="saboxplugin-desc"><div itemprop="description"><p><a href="https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1490439390/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=390957&amp;creativeASIN=1490439390&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;tag=thestorydept-20"></a><a href="https://www.jamiecampbell.com.au/">Jamie Campbell</a> is an author, screenwriter, and television addict.</p>
<p>Jamie is proud to be an Editor for The Story Department.</p>
<p>Her latest series <a href="https://jamiecampbell.com.au/the-project-integrate-series/">Project Integrate</a> is out now.</p>
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		<title>Best of the Web 23 Sep</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jamie Campbell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Sep 2012 05:48:02 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Story &#38; Structure :: Exposition Techniques: Part 1 :: Exposition Techniques: Part 2 :: High Concept Comedy :: Screenplay Review: &#8216;Rehab&#8217; by Sam Laybourne :: The Astonishing Power of &#8216;The Master&#8217; :: Thinking Big – How to Sell Your Small Town Story Script Perfection :: The Yellow-Brick Road to Hollywood :: Screenwriting Website of the ... <a title="Best of the Web 23 Sep" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/best-of-the-web-23-sep/" aria-label="Read more about Best of the Web 23 Sep">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h2>Story &amp; Structure</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/vZ9FnD9x">Exposition Techniques: Part 1</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/k17y9G4v">Exposition Techniques: Part 2</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Xg8DuJtx">High Concept Comedy</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/2Fwvy9Xh">Screenplay Review: &#8216;Rehab&#8217; by Sam Laybourne</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/3qhRsyAI">The Astonishing Power of &#8216;The Master&#8217;</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/106SfZDL">Thinking Big – How to Sell Your Small Town Story</a></p>
<h2>Script Perfection</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/LFA8iQSz">The Yellow-Brick Road to Hollywood</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/JE2UViDn">Screenwriting Website of the Week: Scriptchat</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/expi2KfK">The Moment of Revelation</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/65YbqGjw">Discount to Screenwriters World Conference</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/h0YNAmDQ">Voiceovers and ‘The Shawshank Redemption’</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Wv7TLHqN">Telling and Selling the TV Pilot Script</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/2K23t5Fo">Screenwriting Tip #1112</a></p>
<h2>Pitching &amp; Selling</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/hIDcZBxF">What is a &#8216;Writing Sample&#8217;?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/7MvXqnsn">The Stephen King Guide to Marketing</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/eMoZWl3y">The Scoggins Report: 2012 Spec Market Scorecard</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Tqj4mNo3">What Happens After You Get The Manager?</a></p>
<h2>Best of the Rest</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/7DwPr1Ba">10 Most Inventive Shots in Cinema History</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/aY1ZAtTe">Jack White Talks About Finding Inspiration</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/z5LR6lSs">Four New Posters for Disney&#8217;s Wreck-It Ralph</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/kv8tOsWt">Stephen Chbosky: Rebel with a Cause: Fate</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/l6XfDVto">New Hobbit Images Are Here!</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/tsUx69Vy">Television Really Does Make You Less Lonely</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/TalAl5bl">Writers are Sexy</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/RHGbgGUQ">Rum, Guns and Cigars Part 1</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/6QxL5QmO">Innocence of Muslims: A Dark Demonstration of The Power of Film</A><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/MBFeGtvE">Entertainment One To Produce TV Movie &#038; Mini Based On Stanley Kubrick Scripts</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/1NTSYuuh">Are The Best TV Shows Made From Books These Days?</A><br />
_______________________________</p>
<p>With thanks to Jamie Campbell and Brooke Trezise.</p>
<p>Enjoy!</p>
<p>Karel</p>
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<p>Jamie is proud to be an Editor for The Story Department.</p>
<p>Her latest series <a href="https://jamiecampbell.com.au/the-project-integrate-series/">Project Integrate</a> is out now.</p>
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		<title>Best o/t Web 8 Apr</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Apr 2012 05:16:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Story &#38; Structure :: Rom-Com Archetypes: The Buddy and the Buddy Group :: Exposition: Two Camels :: Female Heroes Katniss, Hermione, ‘Brave’: Defiant Girls With Old Souls Rule :: The Hunger Games Is A Rip Off Of&#8230; :: We&#8217;ve Seen the First 30 Minutes of Pixar&#8217;s Brave! Script Perfection :: Screenwriting Tips: A Writer Should ... <a title="Best o/t Web 8 Apr" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/best-ot-web-8-apr/" aria-label="Read more about Best o/t Web 8 Apr">Read more</a>]]></description>
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<h2>Story &amp; Structure</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/BmlcuKPv">Rom-Com Archetypes: The Buddy and the Buddy Group</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/i1AuoZCR">Exposition: Two Camels</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/rBPCm5NC">Female Heroes Katniss, Hermione, ‘Brave’: Defiant Girls With Old Souls Rule</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/MTiONYJt">The Hunger Games Is A Rip Off Of&#8230;</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/RXk6DkPW">We&#8217;ve Seen the First 30 Minutes of Pixar&#8217;s Brave!</a></p>
<h2>Script Perfection</h2>
<p>:: Screenwriting Tips: <a href="https://t.co/Q0QC00LO">A Writer Should be Able to Make Things Up on the Spot</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/23l41d34">Writing Advice From C.S. Lewis Was Both Adorable and Concise</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/OqfguHCj">The 6 Steps To A Perfect Catchphrase</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/yHu8C0wh">Billy Wilder&#8217;s Notes for Writers</a></p>
<h2>Pitching &amp; Selling</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/0lQP3pJZ">Watch Jim Henson&#8217;s Awesomely Insane Pitch to get The Muppet Show on the Air</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/ja16B1wW">David Michod Set to Write/Direct &#8216;The Rover&#8217; with Joel Edgerton Next</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/ZjnlTNwM">Prometheus Scribe Jon Spaihts Scripting a Mummy Reboot for Universal</a></p>
<h2>Best of the Rest</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/nwmmAlYj">Jaws: Revisiting Hollywood&#8217;s First Summer Blockbuster</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/76axuFoI">The Avengers: Joss Whedon interview</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/rg4MBADg">Nolan&#8217;s &#8216;The Dark Knight Rises&#8217; Lands a PG-13 Rating, As Expected</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/6Uoe5XR7">Battleship: Is Board Game adaptation Hollywood&#8217;s Last Roll of the Dice?</a><br />
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<p>With thanks to Jamie C.</p>
<p>Enjoy!</p>
<p>Karel</p>
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<p>Jamie is proud to be an Editor for The Story Department.</p>
<p>Her latest series <a href="https://jamiecampbell.com.au/the-project-integrate-series/">Project Integrate</a> is out now.</p>
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		<title>Exposition in Cameron&#8217;s The Abyss</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel FG Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 May 2010 12:29:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Yesterday I had the enormous privilege and honor of watching James Cameron&#8217;s The Abyss on the big screen, sitting next to the movie&#8217;s concept designer Ron Cobb. The last time I saw the film in a cinema was at a preview before its release in 1986. The scene in this clip is a trademark Cameron ... <a title="Exposition in Cameron&#8217;s The Abyss" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/exposition-in-the-abyss/" aria-label="Read more about Exposition in Cameron&#8217;s The Abyss">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Yesterday I had the enormous privilege and honor of watching James Cameron&#8217;s The Abyss on the big screen, sitting next to the movie&#8217;s concept designer <a href="https://www.imdb.com/name/nm0167803/">Ron Cobb</a>. The last time I saw the film in a cinema was at a preview before its release in 1986.</h3>
<p>The scene in this clip is a trademark Cameron setup.</p>
<p>Remember the unobtainium &#8211; &#8216;floating rock&#8217; scene in <em>Avatar</em>? That is a case of exposition that some love and others loathe.</p>
<p>This scene from <em>The Abyss</em> sits around about the same time into this movie and sets up an equally important concept, which will be crucial in the movie&#8217;s climax.</p>
<p>The scene is in my view one of the most supreme examples of exposition. It combines character and tension with essential story information.</p>
<p>It shows how James Cameron has always been a tremendously gifted screenwriter.</p>
<p>Enjoy!</p>
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<p>In fact &#8211; and contrary to the unobtainium scene &#8211; Ron Cobb confirmed to me that the fluid breathing system is not sci-fi but fact.  Hippy&#8217;s rat is submerged in actual fluid breathing system liquid and in this scene it is really breathing underwater. Apparently, Beany the rat survived  for quite a while afterwards and died of natural causes.</p>
<p>(On the contrary &#8211; as you might have guessed &#8211; in the movie&#8217;s climax Ed Harris did <em>not</em> breathe liquid. The glass of his suit was tinted amber to suggest it was filled with the liquid.)</p>
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