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		<title>[Video]: John August Pt 2 &#8211; Better Scene Description</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Working on a rewrite? At a loss as to how to go about it? Successful Hollywood screenwriter John August (Big Fish, Frankenweenie, The Nines) takes us on Part 2 on how to rewrite scene description to feel less like a shopping list and more like the movie you want to see on the screen&#8230; If ... <a title="[Video]: John August Pt 2 &#8211; Better Scene Description" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/video-john-august-pt-2-better-scene-description/" aria-label="Read more about [Video]: John August Pt 2 &#8211; Better Scene Description">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3> Working on a rewrite? At a loss as to how to go about it? Successful Hollywood screenwriter John August (<em>Big Fish, Frankenweenie, The Nines</em>) takes us on Part 2 on how to rewrite scene description to feel less like a shopping list and more like the movie you want to see on the screen&#8230; </h3>
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