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		<title>Cinematic Storytelling (6)</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Here’s a sequence from Robert Towne’s Chinatown, a script that really deserves no introduction. This is my favorite sequence in this script in terms of screenwriting techniques. Reading this for the first time was such a revelation to me. by Mystery Man I love the way Towne uses Secondary Headings to cut back and forth ... <a title="Cinematic Storytelling (6)" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-cinematic-storytelling-6/" aria-label="Read more about Cinematic Storytelling (6)">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Here’s a sequence from Robert Towne’s Chinatown, a script that really deserves no introduction.<br />
This is my favorite sequence in this script in terms of screenwriting techniques. Reading this for the first time was such a revelation to me.</h3>
<h4><em>by Mystery Man</em></h4>
<p><a rel="attachment wp-att-13880" href="https://thestorydepartment.com/screenwriting-cinematic-storytelling-6/chinatown_poster/"><img decoding="async" class="alignright" title="Chinatown_Poster" src="/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/Chinatown_Poster-143x150.jpg" alt="" width="143" height="150" /></a>I love the way Towne uses Secondary Headings to cut back and forth between Gittes and Mulwray.</p>
<p>In the hands of lesser writers, this sequence could have been a bear to read and follow. With a pro like Robert Towne, it’s simple, seamless, and visual. As far as I’m concerned, there was no other way to write this sequence.</p>
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<p class="action">L.A. RIVERBED &#8211; LONG SHOT</p>
<p class="action">It&#8217;s virtually empty. Sun blazes off it&#8217;s ugly concrete banks. Where the banks are earthen, they are parched and choked with weeds.</p>
<p class="action">After a moment, Mulwray&#8217;s car pulls INTO VIEW on a flood control road about fifteen feet above the riverbed. Mulwray gets out of the car. He looks around.</p>
<p class="action">WITH GITTES</p>
<p class="action">holding a pair of binoculars, downstream and just above the flood control road &#45;&#45; using some dried mustard weeds for cover. he watches while Mulwray makes his way down to the center of the riverbed.</p>
<p class="action">There Mulwray stops, tuns slowly, appears to be looking at the bottom of the riverbed, or &#45;&#45; at nothing at all.</p>
<p class="action">GITTES</p>
<p class="action">trains the binoculars on him. Sun glints off Mulwray&#8217;s glasses.</p>
<p class="action">BELOW GITTES</p>
<p class="action">There&#8217;s the SOUND of something like champagne corks popping. Then a small Mexican boy atop a swayback horse rides it into the riverbed, and into Gitte&#8217;s view.</p>
<p class="action">MULWRAY</p>
<p class="action">himself stops, stands still when he hears the sound. Power lines and the sun are overhead, the trickle of brackish water at his feet.</p>
<p class="action">He moves swiftly downstream in the direction of the sound, toward Gittes.</p>
<p class="action">GITTES</p>
<p class="action">moves a little further back as Mulwray rounds the bend in the river and comes face to face with the Mexican boy on the muddy banks. Mulwray says something to the boy.</p>
<p class="action">The boy doesn&#8217;t answer at first. Mulwray points to the ground. The boy gestures. Mulwray frowns. He kneels down in the mud and stares at it. He seems to be concentrating on it.</p>
<p class="action">After a moment, he rises, thanks the boy and heads swiftly back upstream &#45;&#45; scrambling up the bank to his car.</p>
<p class="action">There he reaches through the window and pulls out a roll of blueprints or something like them &#8211; he spreads them on the hood of his car and begins to scribble some notes, looking downstream from time to time.</p>
<p class="action">The power lines overhead HUM.</p>
<p class="action">He stops, listens to them &#45;&#45; then rolls up the plans and gets back in the car. He drives off.</p>
<p class="action">GITTES</p>
<p class="action">Hurries to get back to his car. He gets in and gets right back out. The steamy leather burns him. He takes a towel from the back seat and carefully places it on the front one. He gets in and takes off.</p>
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<p><img decoding="async" class="alignright" title="Long_Kiss" src="/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/Long_Kiss-150x150.jpg" alt="" width="150" height="150" /></p>
<h3>And finally, here’s the opening scene from The Long Kiss Goodnight by Shane Black.</h3>
<h3>A number of elements I love about this scene. He has the camera panning from the windowpane over to the bed and to the eyes of the sleeping little girl who wakes up.</h3>
<p>It’s dark. The mother by the bed is just a vague shape.</p>
<p>After a little dialogue, she turns on the nightlight, which brings a surprising visual revelation. And then we’re back to the mother by the bed and then back to same windowpane where we began. Perfect.</p>
<p>My man, Shane Black &#8211; I love his work.</p>
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<p class="action">A WINDOWPANE</p>
<p class="action">Assaulted from without by SNOWFLAKES. Wind tossed.</p>
<p class="action">INSIDE, a bed, dappled with moon shadow. A LITTLE GIRL, fast asleep. The wind whistles and sighs outside. She DREAMS&#46;&#46;&#46; Eyelids closed, eyes roving beneath&#46;&#46;&#46; then suddenly they SNAP open. A stifled cry. She thrashes for her STUFFED BEAR, as a soft voice says:</p>
<p class="character">VOICE</p>
<p class="dialogue">Shhhhh.</p>
<p class="action">And there&#8217;s MOM, kneeling beside her. Vague shape in the dimness. The full moon throws light across one sparkling eye.</p>
<p class="character">LITTLE GIRL</p>
<p class="dialogue">Mommy, the men on the mountain&#46;&#46;&#46;!</p>
<p class="character">MOM</p>
<p class="dialogue">Shhhh. Gone, all gone now.</p>
<p class="parenthetical">(strokes her hair)</p>
<p class="dialogue">I&#8217;m here. Mommy&#8217;s always here and no</p>
<p class="action">one can ever hurt you. Safe now&#46;&#46;&#46;</p>
<p class="action">safe and warm&#46;&#46;&#46; snug as a bug in a</p>
<p class="action">rug.</p>
<p class="parenthetical">(beat)</p>
<p class="dialogue">I&#8217;ll sit with you, think you can</p>
<p class="action">sleep?</p>
<p class="character">LITTLE GIRL</p>
<p class="dialogue">Turn on the nightlight.</p>
<p class="action">The mother nods. Passes her left hand gently over the girl&#8217;s forehead.</p>
<p class="character">MOM</p>
<p class="dialogue">Close your eyes now. I love you.</p>
<p class="action">The child subsides, breathing steady. Eyes closed. The mother rises. Regards her through the dimness. Slowly turns, heads for the door. Flicks on a Winnie the Pooh NIGHTLIGHT &#45;&#45;</p>
<p class="action">Her entire right forearm is slicked with blood. More blood on her Czech-made MP-5 machine gun.</p>
<p class="action">She staggers just a little&#46;&#46;&#46; barely noticeable. Passes out on the light. Into darkness. Sits beside her daughter&#8217;s bed. The child sleeps peacefully. Outside snow slithers at the glass.</p>
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<h4><em>&#8211; Mystery Man</em></h4>
<h4><img decoding="async" class="alignleft" title="Mystery Shoes" src="https://thestorydepartment.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/shoes.png " alt="" width="292" height="134" /></h4>
<p><em>In his own words, </em><em>Mystery Man was &#8220;famous yet anonymous, failed yet accomplished, brilliant yet semi-brilliant. A homebody jetsetting around the world. Brash and daring yet chilled with a twist.&#8221;</em></p>
<p><em>MM blogged for nearly 4 years and tweeted for only 4 months, then disappeared &#8211; mysteriously.</em></p>
<p><em>The Story Department continues to republish his best articles on Monday. </em></p>
<p><em>Here, you&#8217;ll also be informed about the release of his screenwriting book.</em></p>
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