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		<title>Better Dialogue For Screenplays &#8211; John August Pt 4 &#8211; [Video]</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jamie Wynen]]></dc:creator>
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					<description><![CDATA[Working on a rewrite? At a loss as to how to go about it? Successful Hollywood screenwriter John August (Big Fish, Frankenweenie, The Nines) shows us how to write stronger dialogue by examining what belongs in conversation versus what belongs in the action, how to create authentic relationships, and dozens of other little tips and tricks.]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Working on a rewrite? At a loss as to how to go about it? Successful Hollywood screenwriter John August (<em>Big Fish, Frankenweenie, The Nines</em>) shows us how to write stronger dialogue by examining what belongs in conversation versus what belongs in the action, how to create authentic relationships, and dozens of other little tips and tricks.</h3>
<p>[vimeo 14435922 w=500 h=281]</p>
<h5><a href="https://vimeo.com/14435922">Writing better dialogue</a> from <a href="https://vimeo.com/johnaugust">John August</a> on <a href="https://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</h5>
<h4>If you liked this, check out <a href="https://thestorydepartment.com/category/video/">more videos about screenwriting or filmmaking</a>. And if you know of a great video on Screenwriting, let us know in the comments. Thanks!</h4>
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