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		<title>Better Dialogue For Screenplays &#8211; John August Pt 4 &#8211; [Video]</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jamie Wynen]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 2014 03:19:34 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Working on a rewrite? At a loss as to how to go about it? Successful Hollywood screenwriter John August (Big Fish, Frankenweenie, The Nines) shows us how to write stronger dialogue by examining what belongs in conversation versus what belongs in the action, how to create authentic relationships, and dozens of other little tips and tricks.]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Working on a rewrite? At a loss as to how to go about it? Successful Hollywood screenwriter John August (<em>Big Fish, Frankenweenie, The Nines</em>) shows us how to write stronger dialogue by examining what belongs in conversation versus what belongs in the action, how to create authentic relationships, and dozens of other little tips and tricks.</h3>
<p>[vimeo 14435922 w=500 h=281]</p>
<h5><a href="https://vimeo.com/14435922">Writing better dialogue</a> from <a href="https://vimeo.com/johnaugust">John August</a> on <a href="https://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</h5>
<h4>If you liked this, check out <a href="https://thestorydepartment.com/category/video/">more videos about screenwriting or filmmaking</a>. And if you know of a great video on Screenwriting, let us know in the comments. Thanks!</h4>
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		<title>Best of the Web 15 Jul</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jamie Campbell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Jul 2012 00:00:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[middle earth]]></category>
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					<description><![CDATA[Story &#38; Structure :: Character Breakdown :: Bad TV Teaches Lessons :: What is &#8216;Voice&#8217;? :: Creating Memorable Characters :: Don&#8217;t Leave Your Ending to the End :: How to Write an Omniscient Narrator Script Perfection :: Embrace Your Inner Weirdo :: Writers Diet Test. Is Your Sentence Construction Flabby or Fit? :: 7 Essential ... <a title="Best of the Web 15 Jul" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/best-of-the-web-15-jul/" aria-label="Read more about Best of the Web 15 Jul">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h2>Story &amp; Structure</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/DAegInjP">Character Breakdown</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/ElwpDl16">Bad TV Teaches Lessons</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/vlYWWdZs">What is &#8216;Voice&#8217;?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/s8L6pne9">Creating Memorable Characters</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/F2C5EtQu">Don&#8217;t Leave Your Ending to the End</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/6UCfzZHh">How to Write an Omniscient Narrator</a></p>
<h2>Script Perfection</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/GYttRGgV">Embrace Your Inner Weirdo</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Aq9sZWzX">Writers Diet Test. Is Your Sentence Construction Flabby or Fit?</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/SQeVECC4">7 Essential Habits for Writers</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/GtD4I6Pg">Screenplay Formatting</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/Qg5u4TQ0">A Guide to Scriptwriting Essentials</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/1TtmAEiz">Your Moral Vision</a></p>
<h2>Pitching &amp; Selling</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/7KVmAoFz">How to Write a Better Logline</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/0TRplm4d">Receiving Screenwriting Notes</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/OGV27gcX">Why 2nd Best Isn&#8217;t Good Enough</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/yOoCafib">Tips for Subbing to Mags</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/rqdn2NSo">Don&#8217;t Forget to get Your Screenplay Reviewed!</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/0PpY7eBN">Script Feedback Advice</A></p>
<h2>Best of the Rest</h2>
<p>:: <a href="https://t.co/kHQ3PiQi">10 of the Most Powerful Female Characters in Literature</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/OwvRBfan">The Geographic and Chronological Layout of Middle Earth</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/IrJcsNSP">A New Trailer for DreamWorks&#8217; Rise of the Guardians</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/msi4Ol2t">Actors: How to Give Notes to Writers</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/iV7TAiay">An Amazing Behind-The-Scenes Look at the Animation Behind John Carter</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/dh1l1lyw">The Treatment &#8211; Interviews with Industry Bigshots</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/4qkC4tl4">Tim Burton Brings us a Story Form His Own High-School Nightmares</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/zm9SnDhv">John Cleese talks Creativity</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/ueNyzwyv">5 Tips for Directing Children<a/><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/wntblvYr">Ethereal New Banner for The Hobbit</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/fpDsN8CS">A Pedantic Take on the Physics of The Hulk</a><br />
:: <a href="https://t.co/tuHyu8Ry">The Dark Knight Rises Wows Fans at Early Screening</a><br />
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<p>With thanks to Jamie C. and Brooke Trezise.</p>
<p>Enjoy!</p>
<p>Karel</p>
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<p>Jamie is proud to be an Editor for The Story Department.</p>
<p>Her latest series <a href="https://jamiecampbell.com.au/the-project-integrate-series/">Project Integrate</a> is out now.</p>
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		<title>Video: John August on Screenwriting</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Karel FG Segers]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Jul 2010 23:28:59 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[John August&#8217;s blog rocks. Seeing and hearing him talk about his work is even more inspiring. Here is a great, 2-hour talk with the screenwriter about his work and the industry. Did you know he worked on Minority Report? _____________________________________ Check out this video link&#8230; _____________________________________ For more videos about screenwriting or filmmaking, look in ... <a title="Video: John August on Screenwriting" class="read-more" href="https://www.thestorydepartment.com/video-john-august-on-screenwriting/" aria-label="Read more about Video: John August on Screenwriting">Read more</a>]]></description>
										<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3><a href="https://johnaugust.com">John August&#8217;s blog</a> rocks. Seeing and hearing him talk about his work is even more inspiring.</h3>
<h3>Here is a great, 2-hour talk with the screenwriter about his work and the industry. Did you know he worked on Minority Report?</h3>
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<h2 style="text-align: center;"><em>Check out this video link&#8230;</em></h2>
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<p>For <a href="https://thestorydepartment.com/category/video/">more videos about screenwriting or filmmaking</a>, look in the sidebar or click on the category link under the title of this post.</p>
<p>If you know of a great video on Screenwriting, let me know!</p>
<p>Just complete the form below and send me the link.</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>
<p>Karel</p>
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