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		By: Suzanne Jones		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Suzanne Jones]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Apr 2023 14:48:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks for the valuable insights!]]></description>
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		By: John C. Daly		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[John C. Daly]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 Apr 2022 18:48:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[I’m adapting a book, and you just solved a whole bunch of problems for me. Thanks!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I’m adapting a book, and you just solved a whole bunch of problems for me. Thanks!</p>
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		By: Amazing Endings - Wow Them In The End [Career-Makers]		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Amazing Endings - Wow Them In The End [Career-Makers]]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Mar 2021 04:38:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[[&#8230;] (Of course, much of your pain will be avoided if you use a step outline.) [&#8230;]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] (Of course, much of your pain will be avoided if you use a step outline.) [&#8230;]</p>
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		By: Leanne		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Leanne]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 Apr 2020 15:29:26 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Wow. Will definitely be using this in my writing from now on. Can totally see how useful it is for multi-protag stories too <img src="https://s.w.org/images/core/emoji/17.0.2/72x72/1f44d.png" alt="👍" class="wp-smiley" style="height: 1em; max-height: 1em;" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. Will definitely be using this in my writing from now on. Can totally see how useful it is for multi-protag stories too 👍</p>
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		By: Alex		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Alex]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Mar 2020 20:59:50 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thanks Karel,  informative article and useful tool.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Karel,  informative article and useful tool.</p>
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		By: Roz Farlam		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Roz Farlam]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Mar 2020 07:48:53 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Thank you Karel - this is great. As usual you explain/communicate brilliantly!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you Karel &#8211; this is great. As usual you explain/communicate brilliantly!</p>
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		By: Dufrain		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Dufrain]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Mar 2020 21:15:52 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[This is a long article, good info!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a long article, good info!</p>
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		By: Tim White		</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tim White]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Mar 2020 03:01:47 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[Much appreciated Karel. The Event - Action analysis cuts through so much screenwriting jargon and is a much clearer way to understand the interconnection of character and setting.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Much appreciated Karel. The Event &#8211; Action analysis cuts through so much screenwriting jargon and is a much clearer way to understand the interconnection of character and setting.</p>
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