Comments on: The Judges: Week 3 https://www.thestorydepartment.com/the-judges-week-3/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Sun, 30 Jan 2011 05:49:42 +0000 hourly 1 By: Ed Love https://www.thestorydepartment.com/the-judges-week-3/#comment-907 Sun, 30 Jan 2011 05:49:42 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=15866#comment-907 These are great, very helpful! I don’t have much to add, as my first thoughts, in short form, were:

1 – Genre? Consequences? Obstacles?

2 – Repetition.

It’s a great exercise, allowing me to check against the logline for my own work in progress. Thanks!

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