Comments on: The Judges: Week 4 https://www.thestorydepartment.com/the-judges-week-4/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Sat, 05 Feb 2011 08:08:10 +0000 hourly 1 By: David https://www.thestorydepartment.com/the-judges-week-4/#comment-909 Sat, 05 Feb 2011 08:08:10 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=15881#comment-909 1. Don’t believe its going to work but curious enough to want to see if there’s any chance of pulling it off – the bug thing. I assume its not Metamorphosis and he is more like a fly on the wall able to influence events.

2. Can see the scope for drama but agree there’s not much hint of what its really about and almost feel Ive got so much plot I’ve been told the story already.

]]> By: David Di Muro https://www.thestorydepartment.com/the-judges-week-4/#comment-908 Thu, 03 Feb 2011 03:45:18 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=15881#comment-908 Charlie : the log line cracked me up and makes me want to read the treatment. Then it depends.

The Crooked Head: to vague. i’m concerned about setting. is this in the 1800s? 1900s? Why did he choose to move? IS he crazy committed to his faith at the start? You know – it could be a great script because I see potential in all that vagueness, but it needs work for me to actually want to read the treatment.

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