https://www.thestorydepartment.com/video-john-august-pt-1-writing-better-action/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Wed, 24 Dec 2014 11:40:14 +0000 hourly 1 https://www.thestorydepartment.com/video-john-august-pt-1-writing-better-action/#comment-331855 Wed, 24 Dec 2014 11:40:14 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=32558#comment-331855 Good tips here. Agree that the reworked text works better and more cinematically. Though how to maintain the balancing act of describing vivid action without too much margin-to-margin text remains a difficult trick for Yours Truly.

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