https://www.thestorydepartment.com/video-john-august/ Story. Screenplay. Sale. Wed, 29 Feb 2012 02:51:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://www.thestorydepartment.com/video-john-august/#comment-1132 Wed, 29 Feb 2012 02:51:00 +0000 https://thestorydepartment.com/?p=21551#comment-1132 This is a good example for budding screen writers.
Two observations from me.
– he’s thinking pro-filmic & rewrites scene with visual imagery that was previously in dialogue
– he’s aware of subtext & takes out dialogue that is expressing subtext

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