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		By: Bernard Lau		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[All screen writers should really use a screen writing program from the start. A word processor is a horrible way to edit into script format.

As you&#039;ve mentioned, Final Draft is a good program. But there are also free ones available. I use CELTX. These programs allow the right format and it also autofill scenes and characters.

I use the REPLACE command a lot, especially when I want to change character names. It&#039;s much harder to use it to correct punctuation and style and may probably make things slower. I prefer the old fashion way, print it out and get a red pen :-)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All screen writers should really use a screen writing program from the start. A word processor is a horrible way to edit into script format.</p>
<p>As you&#8217;ve mentioned, Final Draft is a good program. But there are also free ones available. I use CELTX. These programs allow the right format and it also autofill scenes and characters.</p>
<p>I use the REPLACE command a lot, especially when I want to change character names. It&#8217;s much harder to use it to correct punctuation and style and may probably make things slower. I prefer the old fashion way, print it out and get a red pen :-)</p>
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		By: Joe		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[Great article, Karel, pointing out ways to edit/wordsmith your script.  One issue I&#039;d like to comment on is the one on manipulation of feelings.  I don&#039;t consider myself a novice but I continually add those sorts of phrases.  The way I look at it, such phrases are descriptions, not for the actor but instead for the reader (my possible financial backer) to understand the reaction to preceding action or dialogue.  I think it totally within the boundaries of good writing to describe a reaction to an action, for instance &quot;Steve hands her the beautifully wrapped present.  Janice opens it, ravenously tearing away the paper, looks inside then instantly smiles&quot;.  Surely something like this is acceptable?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great article, Karel, pointing out ways to edit/wordsmith your script.  One issue I&#8217;d like to comment on is the one on manipulation of feelings.  I don&#8217;t consider myself a novice but I continually add those sorts of phrases.  The way I look at it, such phrases are descriptions, not for the actor but instead for the reader (my possible financial backer) to understand the reaction to preceding action or dialogue.  I think it totally within the boundaries of good writing to describe a reaction to an action, for instance &#8220;Steve hands her the beautifully wrapped present.  Janice opens it, ravenously tearing away the paper, looks inside then instantly smiles&#8221;.  Surely something like this is acceptable?</p>
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