The Judges – Circalit Loglines (7)

The Judges

In this section we are publishing the loglines from the participants of the Circalit / Story Department “First Draft Script Contest”. Our judges have reviewed the loglines and give you their considered feedback. It may help you craft a powerful logline. by The Judges Table For Two [box] “A cheating spouse, falsely accused of sexual … Read more

Video: Plot Device

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I can’t believe I had not posted this video yet. I love it, have used it in some of my classes and I think it is brilliantly written and executed. It is also plain fun.



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Story & Structure :: How to Write Groundhog Day :: Screenplay To Screen: The Grey :: “A Bad Mystery is When Your Characters Keep Asking The Same Question” :: Story Details for Sci-Fi Sequel Riddick Script Perfection :: Screenwriting Tips: “INT. CHRISTMAS DAY — DAY” Q & A on Formatting | :: Finishing what you … Read more

Mini-Review – Man On A Ledge

Man On A Ledge Mercifully Short Review by Jonathan Empson   Weathered, chiselled, stony, of pleasing proportions but getting trampled all over… No, I’m not talking about the ledge, I’m talking about Sam Worthington, playing Nick Cassidy, the man standing on it. We first meet Nick as he checks into a Manhattan hotel, orders a … Read more