Last month I broke a record for the year. I saw three movies at the cinema that I truly enjoyed (and I only watched three).
One of these three failed spectacularly at the box office: the Australian crime-action flick SON OF A GUN, written and competently directed by newcomer Julius Avery. It is by far the most entertaining and best made Australian film I have seen in this genre in a long time. Yet it failed.
NOTE: This article contains spoilers about NIGHTCRAWLER, SON OF A GUN, GONE GIRL, WHIPLASH and CHARLIE WILSON’S WAR.
Story Diagnosis
The story is that of young JR (Brenton Thwaites), who breaks out of prison and then joins the crew of Brendan (Ewan McGregor), a hardened crime boss. SPOILER: in the third act JR rises from under Brendan’s wings, and outsmarts him to get his ‘rightfully’ earned share, to rejoice in a – somewhat long – happy ending. There is also a love story, which for me didn’t work all that well.
Next I saw GONE GIRL, the novel adaptation everyone seems to be talking about. Some claim that its success wiped out any chances for SON OF A GUN here in Australia. I probably don’t need to say much about GONE GIRL’s story, because it has Ben Affleck, so it won’t have escaped you if you passed at the box office lately.
The Philosophical Ending
I found GONE GIRL an entertaining mystery thriller with a smart, non-compromising ending. It is about marriage as a metaphor for… well, marriage. The twist conclusion is courageous, and reminiscent of CHARLIE WILSON’S WAR, in that it built a thesis, then turned it on its head.
Where CHARLIE WILSON’S WAR surprisingly ended in a comment on the arms race, here we are reminded about what marriage really is, and the hero ultimately does not achieve his goal. In fact, NIGHTCRAWLER also refuses to deliver the hopeful happy ending, with the difference that the hero gets away with it.
What didn’t really work for CHARLIE WILSON ($119m BO for a $75m budget), didn’t harm GONE GIRL’s box office ($254m at the time of writing, with a budget of $61m).
Then I saw WHIPLASH, which was made on a $3m budget, and which will rake in many times that, after tremendous word of mouth and a likely Academy Award run. It’s the story of Andrew, a young jazz drummer (Miles Teller) playing under a band conductor (JK Simmons) who seems to take pleasure in making things hard for Andrew. Again, this movie has a surprising ending because the antagonist has an ultimate surprise in Act Three, then redeems himself in the finale.
Back To Basics
Let me try and summarise the stories of these three films to a gotta-decide-in-15secs simplicity. GONE GIRL is about a guy who REALLY wants to leave his wife, but she is giving him a hard time. WHIPLASH is about a guy who REALLY wants to be the drummer in a jazz band, but is given a hard time by the conductor. And SON OF A GUN is about a young criminal, fresh out of prison who REALLY wants to … Well, there’s the problem.
Once he is out of prison at the beginning of Act Two, JR in SON OF A GUN doesn’t REALLY want anything badly. For most of the movie he is not following his own dreams, but simply does what Brendan wants. He is a PASSIVE character, which the average punter doesn’t like. And to recoup the budget of movies such as ANIMAL KINGDOM and SON OF A GUN, it seems that you do need that mainstream audience. One would think the Australian film funding agencies should get that point by now…
Great Movies – Silly Budgets
So there you have it. People keep talking about how the market has transformed, television has taken over, and film distribution models need to change and … blah blah blah. In order to reach an audience, you need to tell a story that is clear, with a strong main character that has a CLEAR GOAL, which they pursue OBSESSIVELY. Characters that don’t want anything or don’t know what they want, won’t cut it.
Let me repeat that I really liked SON OF A GUN. But I’m not a regular punter. I work in the industry and often times like non-mainstream films. Still, to finance these films with public funding at the levels they have been ($5m – $10m and more) is insanity.
If you make low-concept films, you are unlikely to reach the masses, therefore you need to produce them at a lower cost. If American filmmakers can do indies with decent cast under $5m (see above, WHIPLASH: $3.3m), anyone can. A healthy film industry is not necessarily built on small films alone, though. I believe it is vital to have a good mix of arthouse and mainstream.
The first rule of screenwriting is still: start from a strong, simple concept, with characters that want something – badly.
-Karel Segers
Karel Segers wrote his first produced screenplay at age 17. Today he is a story analyst with experience in acquisition, development and production. He has trained students worldwide, and worked with half a dozen Academy Award nominees. Karel speaks more European languages than he has fingers on his left hand, which he is still trying to find a use for in his hometown of Sydney, Australia. The languages, not the fingers.
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There are two kinds of audiences for movies. Most people are happy with big-budget, star-laden Hollywood fare. But there’s another audience for smaller, edgier, sometimes foreign language fare that we might call ‘indi’ or ‘art house’. But both these terms are misleading, so I’ll call them ‘specialist’.
So what kind of films get made in Australia? Apart from George Miller and Baz Luhrman, no one’s making films for that big audience. But I would argue that neither are we making films for the specialist audience. The specialist films that people actually pay to see are edgier (THE DISAPPEARANCE OF ALICE CREED), more challenging (MONSTERS), more original (BOYHOOD) and especially cheaper (ANOTHER EARTH, $100,000 budget).
Think of films as motor vehicles. Most people buy cars, while a minority prefers the edgier, two-wheel motor bike experience. Australians, though, keep making three-wheeler cars, and scratch their heads every time they make one and discover no one’s buying.
The argument about different distribution models is a red herring. Unless your movie bears some resemblance to movies that people actually want to pay to see, then it doesn’t matter how you distribute it. I don’t want to buy a three-wheeler car, but neither do I want to lease one, rent one for the weekend, or borrow one from my mate. Oh, and if your movie cost $12m to make (THE ROVER, TRACKS), then in 2014 it MUST do significant business in cinemas in order to drive the sales in other media. No amount of alternative distribution is going to change that.
Clive – I totally agree. Watched ANOTHER EARTH recently, and wondered “Why are we not making this type of film???”
Watched THE BABADOOK tonight – Apple TV, love it – and all I could think of was “How much did this cost???”
I loved THE BABADOOK, too, but all I could think of was “Why didn’t this get a theatrical release in the USA before Halloween instead of something like Ouija?” I probably couldn’t get a good answer even if I asked a Ouija board…
Looking forward to seeing WHIPLASH. GONE GIRL was ok… a bit too, I don’t know, tabloid-ishy in a trashy way. Not Fincher’s best work (and neither was Girl With the Dragon Tattoo which apparently didn’t garner enough interest to Hollywoodize the sequels.)