Working on a rewrite? At a loss as to how to go about it? Successful Hollywood screenwriter John August (Big Fish, Frankenweenie, The Nines) takes us on Part 2 on how to rewrite scene description to feel less like a shopping list and more like the movie you want to see on the screen…
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More good screenwriting tips here. Making a scene opening snappier and more interesting is quite important.
Great post! I still haven’t read On Writing but it has been on my reading list for ages! I love the Artists way too. In adtodiin to these, I really recommend Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott and Writing Down the Bones by Natalie Goldberg. Good writing!