The Judges – Circalit Loglines (14)

The Judges

In this section we are publishing the loglines from the participants of the Circalit / Story Department “First Draft Script Contest”. Our judges have reviewed the loglines and give you their considered feedback. It may help you craft a powerful logline. by The Judges [message type=”info”]For more about loglines, check our designated web site www.loglineit.com! … Read more

Best o/t Web 8 Apr

Story & Structure :: Rom-Com Archetypes: The Buddy and the Buddy Group :: Exposition: Two Camels :: Female Heroes Katniss, Hermione, ‘Brave’: Defiant Girls With Old Souls Rule :: The Hunger Games Is A Rip Off Of… :: We’ve Seen the First 30 Minutes of Pixar’s Brave! Script Perfection :: Screenwriting Tips: A Writer Should … Read more

Screenwriting: from Fail to Sale (5/5)

As a final note on screenwriting, one of the places I’ve learnt the MOST about this craft from is from READING unproduced screenplays. ‘Unproduced’ is the operative word here, there’s little point to reading a produced screenplay, it’s like reading The Lord of The Rings AFTER seeing the movie. (Note from Karel: Some of this … Read more

Mini-Review – Goodbye, First Love

Goodbye, First Love Mercifully Short Review by Jonathan Empson   Original title: Un Amour de Jeunesse Camille (Lola Creton) is sexy but clingy, and suffering teen angst over the imminent departure of her boyfriend Sullivan to South America. The angst continues into her 20s as he falls off the map and she studies to be an … Read more