Script Perfection – Page 19 – The Story Department

Script Check: DAY / NIGHT

March 3, 2010 by Karel FG Segers

Many newbie screenwriters use times of day other than DAY or NIGHT in their scene headings. It looks unprofessional. DUSK and DAWN are not used in spec scripts by beginning screenwriters unless the kiss by sunset is essential to understanding the story. Filming exteriors with this light is just too expensive because the window of … Read more

Translating Visions

February 12, 2010 by Chris Wehner

At one time or another, all of us, have been told by those wiser that we should “write visually” as screenwriters. It’s good advice and frankly no self-respecting screenwriter should ever stop thinking visually. But, what exactly does it mean? I have seen some inexperienced screenwriters take this instruction to heart and after reviewing some … Read more

Strip the Script

November 27, 2009 by Cherie Lee

How do you avoid having a rubbish script?

Learn how to identify what’s necessary and what’s not and throw out the junk.

What’s the junk?

Read on to find out from top L.A. teacher Jeff Kitchen.
Read more

Cherie Lee

I studied acting for three years and hold a graduate diploma in writing from Sydney’s UTS. My interest in film and writing was solidified through interning at The Story Department and gave me the opportunity to fine tune my skills. I’ve been involved with several film projects, the most recent of which was shortlisted for Tropfest.

With the knowledge gained from university and my experience at The Story Department, I’m now specialising in professional feedback on short films and documentaries.

How to Write a Readable Script

November 13, 2009 by Cherie Lee

What are the primary criteria that will ensure your script stands out from the rest? Steven Fernandez reveals some essential secrets to getting read. In my 4½ months in LA, one of the most important screenwriting lessons I learned is that there are simple principles to follow to ensure Hollywood screenplay readers will accept the … Read more

Mental Spackle

October 30, 2009 by Cherie Lee

Spackle |ˈspakəl| Noun: A compound used to fill cracks in plaster and produce a smooth surface. What is ‘mental spackle’? Merrel Davis explains how to ensure you fill all the gaps in your script. Mental Spackle is a term I’ve coined to describe what the mind of a writer does when revising. As you go … Read more

How do you avoid having a rubbish script?

Learn how to identify what’s necessary and what’s not and throw out the junk.

What’s the junk?

Read on to find out from top L.A. teacher Jeff Kitchen.Read more

Read on to find out from top L.A. teacher Jeff Kitchen.
Read more